Howdy poets! And welcome to the first ever Red Wolf Poems prompt. We invite you to think, consider, and write. And your poem might be selected for Issue 2 of Red Wolf Journal. For more information about the upcoming issue, read our call for submissions.
Tawnya and I said this in our call for submissions: “Water, especially rivers, has been rooted in the human consciousness perhaps since the beginning of our existence as a species.” Maybe that’s why we keep being inspired by them, fascinated by them, and depicting them in our arts: visual, literary, and music. This week I’m going to ask you to use music as a jump off point to find your poem.
Pick a song that is either about rivers or speaks of rivers in some way, shape, or form. My personal favorite is “Find the River” by R.E.M., especially these lyrics:
The ocean is the river’s goal,
a need to leave the water knows –
we’re closer now than light years to go.
(If you don’t know a good river song: here are some suggestions: “Take Me to the River” by Al Green or the Talking Heads; “Yes, the River Knows”, by The Doors; “Proud Mary”; “Big River” by Johnny Cash; “As I Went Down to the River to Pray”, “Dam that River” by Alice In Chains; “Green River” by Credence Clearwater Revival; “Old Man River”, “River of Time” by Van Morrison. Or…you could check out this list.)
The idea is, pick a song about rivers, or with a river in it, that inspires you. Listen to it, over and over again. Let your mind grab onto a lyric and wander. Let the song drip into you and look at your reflection in its clear, limpid pools.
A suggestion: if you’re like me and you normally come out with a coherent first draft, try to abandon your customary (especially if it is somewhat left-brained) way to produce a poem and just free-write first, letting your unconscious mind take the lead. Don’t censor, don’t edit in mid-poem, etc. You get the point. You can post your free-write as your final version, or clean it up — it’s up to you.
One more thing: we do ask that you include (whether in your process notes or just somewhere in your blog post) the title/artist of the song you chose.
-Nicole
Congratulations on the lovely new site, and the intriguing prompt. I’ve been reading prompts and poems for a bit on the old site, looking forward to more at your new home.
Hoping you’ll poem often here.
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More inspired by the body of water that flows by my backyard (natures music) than any one piece of music. I’m not good with reclaiming others music – so I just went with something that I had waiting in the flow…
http://juleslongerstrandsofgems.wordpress.com/2014/05/01/right-writ-wrought/
Nature has a music all its own. Glad you joined us.
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My wishy washy poem is here
I wouldn’t say the poem is wishy-washy. Great song choice. Never heard it before now.
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Here’s a wet one for you. http://miskmask.wordpress.com/2014/05/01/some-rivers-keep-you-like-a-trinket/
This makes me shudder in a good way. Both the poem, and the music from which it rose.
I jumped the gun before but here it is again at the right time..
http://georgeplaceblog.wordpress.com/2014/05/01/a-river-runs-through-it/
Great choice on the music. Nothing like classic soul to bring those love emotions to the surface.
I needed this place in the worst way! Great move and happy to be here. My first offering on the NEW RED WOLF POEMS:
http://wojisme.wordpress.com/2014/05/01/the-river-runs/
Did you now? Great to see ya, Walt.
Intrigued by your choice of song, impressed by the internal rhyme in your poem.
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I enjoyed this thank you!
http://wordrustling.wordpress.com/2014/05/01/timeless-beauty/
I like how your poem treats the music as a river.
I rejected several songs before I got to Carly Simon’s The River as sung by Tim Buckley. They lyrics were arresting and I took a couple of them and spun my own web in a poem titled Running For My Life
The song gave me goosebumps.
Agreed. The song, and the story both.
Here’s a poem http://puffofsmokepoems.com/2014/05/02/rowing-this-boat/
Process Notes: Intriguing prompt. This is not at all the poem I intended to write, and I’ve still got another song in mind. But today, I made this instead. Definite first draft material, prompted by a hectic few weeks. Still adjusting to the contours of a newly empty nest, my children and their lives took over my rowboat for a bit. More experienced Sailor Parents tell me this is how it goes on the river: Leave them to steer their own boats. Steer your own. But sometimes, Exciting Events, Worries, or Calamities plunge you back into the parenting river for a mile or two.
Not bad for a first draft. Thanks for joining us.
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Here’s my offering:
http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2014/05/03/firewater/
-Nicole
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Old Father Thames has been a part of my life for longer than I care to say: http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com/2014/05/03/river/
Very cool, that a string of songs took you to your poem destination.
First thought is rarely best
http://fredherring.wordpress.com/2014/05/03/riverine/
Well, this one knocked my socks off.
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On second thought, I had a second thought on the subject –
http://wojisme.wordpress.com/2014/05/05/fleet-feet-frozen-current/
And that’s a good thing. The more the merrier.
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aloha Nicole. i know i dont always color inside the guidelines. . . .and this is one of those times. i also know i have to start somewhere. so this is it. here:
http://wp.me/pSBwA-1KC
with River Lyrics – or – Friendship Stones
have fun with your river poems. aloha. rick.
Two haibun…I find that intriguing, as well as how your piece moves and winds like a river.
aloha ravenswingpoetry. i’m not sure if i’m understanding this correctly. are you seeing two haibun with my response? there have been times when i have included two haibun in a post (i did that recently with NaPoWriMo). i had considered this all as one haibun. my understanding was/is?? that along with the prose there must be at least one haiku, however there can be more then one haiku as well. i may be miss-understanding that tho, so if that is the case please let me know how you see it.
on the flip side, yes, i can see how two haibun would be cool. fun. thank you. aloha.
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My contribution is here – http://suzannemillerwritings.wordpress.com/2014/05/07/river-tanka/
I like the pairing of the verse with the image. Very cool.
Thanks – and you’re right – I did attribute it to the wrong group – it should have read – Proud Mary – Credence Clearwater Revival.
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I know I’m very late to this party, and a newbie here, but here’s my take on Simon & Garfunkel’s Bridge Over Troubled Water, which I hope will suit the prompt: http://ccchampagne.wordpress.com/2014/05/10/i-will-help-you/
Welcome to the party. Glad you came. Excellent song choice. 🙂